Tuesday 10 March 2020

The mystery of the missing sweets

Today we had to make a poem about something naughty we have done mine is about the many times i have stole sweets of the kitchen table.
The mystery of the missing sweets
I have stolen
The many  sweets
That were sitting on the table
And which 
you were 
Probably
Going to 
give me one


Forgive me 
they were so delicious 
So sweet
And so sugary

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  1. Mrs Bailey28 March 2020 at 19:49

    Hi Tom,

    I love this poem and have a feeling it may be based on a true story...???

    Anyway I was wonderful to see you get so involved in this writing task.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Mrs B.

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