Tuesday, 10 March 2020

The mystery of the missing sweets

Today we had to make a poem about something naughty we have done mine is about the many times i have stole sweets of the kitchen table.
The mystery of the missing sweets

I have stolen
The many  sweets
That were sitting on the table

And which 
you were 
Going to 
give me one

Forgive me 
they were so delicious 

So sweet
And so sugary

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tom,

    I love this poem and have a feeling it may be based on a true story...???

    Anyway I was wonderful to see you get so involved in this writing task.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Mrs B.


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