Tuesday, 21 July 2020

Decision burger

I made this decision burger because are class went to see Harold, Harold showed us a slimier decision burger are teacher asked us to make are hone one this is my one.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Tom,

    Thanks for sharing your decision burger. I love how you have made it very easy to read. The example of going over or around the fence is a good example.

    A next step will be to develop the word influences more. You could talk about how people and things like adverts can help influence us in a certain direction when making a choice.

    Thank you for sharing Tom.

    Regards,

    Mrs B.

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  2. Hi Tom it's Logan from Awahono School. You did really well your next steps are to spell the words correctly and remember to double check.

    That is really goooooooddddd!!!

    By Logan.

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  3. Hi Tom nice work on presenting your Harold burger. A next step for you is spelling double check! Good job from your sister.

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